RP Training: Jordan Victor

The setting sun glinted off the head of the morning star Jordan carried in his hand, and he set the weapon in a specially-made holster attached to one of his greaves. He sighed. He had been pursuing his quarry for days. From Tenval to Jovath to Carial, he had relentlessly followed his prey's hasty egress towards Kolath City, where he believed he would be safe. Jordan scoffed at the idea. It had been foolish enough to attempt to assassinate the leader of the town of Tenval, but even more so was it to assume he could outrun a bounty hunter of Jordan's reputation. The man had tried to lose him by going through different towns and cities, but Jordan was too experienced to be thrown off by such hastily-made traps. The man was now crossing the woodlands towards Kolath City, Jordan could feel it. He would catch his prey soon. Suddenly, he saw smoke in the distance……

Perfect! Am I suppose to add?

Yes. ;) It's all for you! :)

Okay!

The man had tried to burn the city! Jordan ran as fast as he can now. Trying to catch his prey. Suddenly, he saw the man he had pursued! The man threw out his weapons and charged as fast as he can into him! Jordan knew how to handle this very well. He took out his morning star and shield to defend. When all of a sudden….

We're RPI-ing bro, this isn't another TSTNE. Check out Ian's and Nicolas' RP threads to see how its done.

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BTW: I was gonna add more but had dinner

The man had tried to burn the city! Jordan ran as fast as he can now. Trying to catch his prey. Suddenly, he saw the man he had pursued! The man threw out his weapons and charged as fast as he can into him! Jordan knew how to handle this very well. He took out his morning star and shield to defend. When all of a sudden....

OOC: He was on his way to Kolath City, but the man hadn't reached it yet. And why would he try to burn it? And, even if he did attempt to, the city is way too large for him to totally burn.

OOC: Oh, whatever then

OOC: Sorry if I offended you, I really didn't mean to. You can change the story.

OOC: No, ya didn't offended me! Not even close :) just didn't understand in the beginning. But now we knows :D

OOC: Are you still gonna use this?