The Story That Never Ends

Yay!!! Yeah, I think that would be a good idea :)

@Hannah - TOTALLY GOOD IDEA!!!!!!!!!!! It's like he's the whole base for this thing…we have been totally stuck since he left…. :(

We've also been waiting for Hannah…. :)

Oh, and Emily had a good addition too, right?

Oh, and Emily had a good addition too, right?

SORRY! :(! My computer had problems :(…..I was late and now I am shunned :(…….

no you aren't, Hannah! We love you!!! :)

If Jimmy isn't back by the end of the Bible Bee, I'd still be interested in continuing the writing even if he isn't here yet… :)

Lol we won't shun u over something so silly!! Lol
@SBG- ok!

Hey guys :)! Our internet is down (I'm on a iPhone) So The addition will be up on tuesday or monday (Thats when the people come to fix it) SOOOO SORRY! It almost seems like NOTHING wants me to put my addition up :(!!!!!! Sorry again :(! Trying my best :(!!!!

It's ok. I understand Internet problems. :) maybe it's providence making us wait for Jimmy's next break. :) lol

@Nicolas - of course, totally!
@Dani – haha!!! :)

sort of random but, hey guys, lol, the person who checked us into our hotel tonight was named Britton :P :P

Are you guys going to start it up again??? I really, really like it! I'd like to help…if you're all right with that. If not, that's all right, too. I don't like people barging in most of the time. :)

PLEASE POST :)! Hey guys, we have internet, but the computer I had it on is having some problems (AGAIN!!!!!!!!!) So I will only have it on tomorrow :(. Well, At least you have something to look forward to :P! Well, since Jimmy isn't here to give suggestions, it won't be as good as usual though :P!

Lol that's funny. :)

FINALLY I WILL POST MY ADDITION :D! Jimmy is not here to edit so it won't be as good as usually but here it is :D!

 After not to many minutes of thinking Lord Melkior decided on his plan. 

“You there. Slave!” He called. The man came as summoned.

“Yes, master?”

“Prepare my steed.” He said slowly, evilly anticipating the scene to come. 

Lord Melkior rode through the forest as fast as the animal would go. He had never seen Lord Arsoth since the day he had betrayed him and Lord Melkior never wanted to see him ever again unless it was the day of his death, and he, Lord Melkior, was to be Lord Arsoth’s slayer. His mind wandered back to the time of when the evil man had betrayed him, and his heart felt like it was on fire with hate and wanted with all his mind to let his anger run free and to kill that man in the worst way, a slow and very painful death.

Their plan was to over throw the Count of Omb and to become joint rulers of the land. They both saw the Count of Omb as a weak ruler, and far to lenient to the will of the peasants. They would keep the “weak” man hostage until he would give them the right to rule the taken kingdom. Their plan was cutoff, as, on being informed of the plan, Lord Arsoth had told Lord Frabicious. Lord Frabicious was a secret spy for the Count of Omb to take out and plan to overthrow him. And-

His flow of thought was cut off. He had not noticed he had been on the steed for hours and had arrived at the destination.

He quickly slipped of the horse and quietly approached the grounds.

He suddenly stepped on a twig snapping it and warning the people there of his presence.

“You traitor! You VILE WRETCH!!!” Said Lord Melkior as blade met blade.

“I was not the traitor here! You in all yo- yeee-“ He groaned as Lord Melkior’s blade swung inches away from his neck . Regaining his breath, “you in your, your, FILTHY insolence  and evil are not worthy to live!” 

Suddenly Lord Melkior’s blade struck his opponent in the side cutting a deep, fatal wound. 

“You, you…” Said Melkior gasping for breath with the sweat rolling down his face. He laid his sword against Lord Arsoth’s neck as he lied on the ground nursing his wound with his hand. “WHERE is the king? You KNEW I would be demolished if  anyone would, before me, bring the Count of Omb, that horrible man. WHERE IS HE?!” He pressed the sword more  closely to his neck as to cause a trickle of blood to drip down. 

“I-I-I…”

“Just answer!” Said the captor with pleasure showing in his eyes as he continued to threaten further.

“He escaped just days ago!” Lord Arsoth said desperately hoping to have mercy.

“LIAR!!!” Said Lord Melkior as he slew the evil man with one quick swipe of the blade.

What do you guys think? I know not as good as usual but anything I should add or take away??????????

@Rachel - please do add!!!! :) As long as you've read the entire story and know some of the history of the characters (you can find that out by reading some of the comments) please add! :)

I am about to declare this thread officially dead till Jimmy gets back. :( ;(

Noooo!! It's not dead!!! It's just sort of on hold till the end of November. =D

What did you think of my addition? I need some help cause I don't have Jimmy :(

:( :(
I think it's good! I think about the last chapter though, I haven't really kept up with as much as the rest of the book, so I'm slightly confused with what was happening… :P

Maybe someone could post a quick summary? When I get back on break in about a month, I will try to get things back up to speed. :)

:( :( I think it's good! I think about the last chapter though, I haven't really kept up with as much as the rest of the book, so I'm slightly confused with what was happening... :P

Yeah…

This is just sad…..remember the thread's glory days…….sigh sniff sniff………JIMMY COME HOME!!!! WE NEED HOPE ;(

Awesome addition!!! :) I think we need a little more to bridge the gap in between Lord Arsorh being attacked by the people from the western fortresses and him getting killed by Lord Melkior. :) but I love the fact that Melkior and Arsoth where planning to over throw the count of Omb. ;) you guys sure know how to make plot twists!!! :)

I am about to declare this thread officially dead till Jimmy gets back. :( ;(

Aw, come on. It doesn't have to be! Like Emily said, we've just gotta wait until the Bible Bee's over! :)

Great addition, BTW!! :D

Yes! Then everyone will post, and post, and post and then we'll be done :)!

Thanks :)!

You can post! :) if u want to.. :)

Not really, actually. :P I'd love to, but I don't have the time!! :( :(

Just to bring it up to the top. THIS WAS AT THE BOTTOM OF PAGE TWO GUYS :(!!!!!!!!!!! We can't let this happen!!!! :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

Don't worry! It'll come back up after BB, remember? :)

Maybe someone could post a quick summary? When I get back on break in about a month, I will try to get things back up to speed. :)

Does anyone here have time to do this? If not I can probably sooner or later:)

I barely have enough time to keep up with a few threads on here. :( oh well life goes on… ;)

@Dani - me too - this is like the first time i've been on since who-knows-when! :(

Whimper sniff Whimper sniff It's so sad echo so sad, so sad, sad, sad, ad, ad

Hey Hannah….will you and Daniel be coming to the Memverse meeting at nationals? If so, could you please write me an email so I can email you the details and name tag (just click on my name and my email will be on that page)?

So who all is coming? I'm pretty sure our whole family is coming (that's okay, right? Dad doesn't want us wandering thru the hotel by ourselves.)

Ummm…I don't know…
Yes…your whole family can come. I really want to meet y'all!

Plz plz come!!! We can talk about TSTNE there!!!!!!!!!! Plz plz plz!!!!

I think so :)!!!!!!!!!! My dad is ok with it just I need to know what time and where before it is 100% confirmed :)! Ok! I'll do so once I am 100% sure :)! I can't wait :)!

Well, if you just send me an email (click my picture and my email will be there) then I'll send you all the details.

Ok :)! I just wrote you! Again, thanks for working on this and for giving me the details :)!

I'll try :)! Are you coming?

It's my number 1 priority but I'm not sure the fam will agree. :)

Well, you've got to convince them to come :)

Ok. :) little brother wants to shouldn't be hard.. :) :)

Good :)

:)

Prepare for a re-vamp. :)

I am on Fall Break! If it is all right, I am going to go over the story, post the last couple chapters, and say what is going on right now. I know it is almost Bible Bee nationals, but I thought it would be nice for everyone to know where we are so that when it is over, we can finish it up. :)

WHO'S WITH ME!?