*Urgent Message*

Started by Hannah W. (Adelaide)
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Hannah W. (Adelaide)

The Story That Never Ends has slowed down A LOT and that is really sad :(. I was hoping that some of you (If you would like :)) could make a addition (it doesn't have to be a paragraph it could be a sentence!) to help jumpstart this thing again :)! Hopefully we can do this. Thanks ALOT!

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Twilr

Why yes ;)

id like to help. Is it just like that game where we go around and every one adds a few sentences or what?

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Hannah W. (Adelaide)

YAY!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE :)!!!!!!!! Yes it is just like that :). We have all of what we have done so far on pg.65 (I think) so If you would like to read that we would REALLLY enjoy your help :). Thanks :).

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Twilr

YAY!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE :)!!!!!!!! Yes it is just like that :). We have all of what we have done so far on pg.65 (I think) so If you would like to read that we would REALLLY enjoy your help :). Thanks :).

yeah no prob :)

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Twilr

I've looked a little bit at the story (i copied it onto my computers word processor) but its quite long so i may not be able to add anything until this time next week;( I'm not quite sure how long it'll take for me to read it but ill add when i have!

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Roy Phillips

I would be glad to help if I can.
I've read it but I'm not sure what should happen next.
(the vary last entry may need to be Modified. but that's just a thought)

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Hannah W. (Adelaide)

Well, I would say read the whole story on pg. 65, then post on what you want to write about, if approved (it always is :P) then write and post :)!

Thanks for helping :)!

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Hannah W. (Adelaide)

Lord Melkior rode through the forest as fast as his horse would go. He had not seen Lord Arsoth since the day he had left for his mission, and Lord Melkior vowed that he never would see him again until it was the day of Arsoth’s death. He, Lord Melkior, was to be Lord Arsoth’s slayer. His mind wandered back to his situation, and his heart felt like it was on fire with hate. Arsoth would gain great glory and prestige with the Count of Omb for capturing the king, and that glory would be his own death sentence. Melkior was recognized as the most cunning and artful of the Council (besides its great leader), and it would be an enormous blow to his pride if another were to succeed in such a skilfull action as capturing the king himself.

It had, for a long time, been Arsoth and Melkior’s joint-plan to overthrow the Count of Omb and to become rulers of Kornaiden. They both saw the Count of Omb as a threat, and far too powerful to allow to remain in authority. It was the intention to keep the “hostage” until he willingly gave them the right to rule. “Now,” Lord Melkior reflected, “Lord Arsoth has decided to seek power for himself. In capturing the king, he must be trying to enhance the Count of Omb’s authority over the Council, as well as his own! We shall see how that turns out for him!”

His continually vile flow of thought was cut off. He had not noticed that he had been on the steed for hours and had just arrived at the destination.

That is, he had arrived, but he did not then know it.

Well, I don't really understand your questions (Please Clarify a little more so I can answer) But here is the entire addition. There is more after but not on PG. 65 since not edited. (BTW this is several additions back now.)

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Emily H

Hey Hannah:) Do you have the last couple parts of the story that aren't on pg 65? If you don't I can go dig them up but I thought I'd ask you first before I did that :P Thanks!! :D

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Emily H

Yeah, but I meant the ones before that, that were posted not too long before Nats… I think it was something about Melchoir, but I didn't really read it…

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