Brickmaster 2.0
Started by Hiruko KagetaneHannah W. (Adelaide)
Thanks! I really like yours! Is my character to young? I am looking at everyone else's and they are all 18-24! Or should I keep the age?
biblebee
Keep the age…it's great!
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Thanks :)!!! I like yours a lot BTW!
Sarah B.
Carissa could you come to “the list” and help me a little? I have questions.
Rose Tyler
Keep it! :D
Hiruko Kagetane
I popped in to say that girls don't need to have only bows and arrows/ sword. Wikipedia "Tessen".
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Just letting you know that I have had this thing written for 24 hours but I was only allowed to post it just now…..
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
OK :)!
Sarah B.
Could someone with a good memory help me please??? Go to "Memverse User List" thread.
Rose Tyler
I know…but those are ??my?? weapons :) Thanks though!
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
With what?? :) I have a pretty good memory….
Hiruko Kagetane
Did you look it up? You should! As should anyone wanting their female character to have a weapon, but still appear ladylike.
Sarah B.
I need help putting the list back together.
Rose Tyler
Lol! Yes, Sam, I looked it up.
biblebee
I know. And I did say that she used the sword.
Thanks Hannah :)
InSoloChristo
Name: Keilab the Green
Age: Young adult, exact age unknown (Probably younger than he seems.)
Appearance: Wears brown leather boots and a thick leather suit of armor stained a deep green. It has a hood, which he wears only when in combat. His hair is brown, and kept short. He wears brown leather boots. He refuses to cumber himself with adornments.
Weapons: Woodsman's axe; crossbow; daggers for both throwing and stabbing.
Description: He is very studious, and prefers to stand aside and observe what little society his is in. But he is always eager to defend "unarmed pedestrians" with his flawless crossbowmanship, sometimes showing up out of nowhere to do so. A excellent horseman, and none too slow on foot, he can appear on a scene and disappear before his presence is fully realized. He disappears for long periods of time into the forest to read a book.
Foremost Vice: He has a very nasty tendency to look into things that aren't his business. Perhaps this stems from his care for others, but all too often he exceeds the bounds of courtesy…
Sarah B.
Aw man! I wish I had thought of a cross bow!!!! I really like yours! ;)
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Good! I like it :)! I hope you can write often :)!
Ian R.2
Wow! This looks awesome! Here's my character:
James
Age: 17
Appearance: About 5 11', fairly muscular build, bright blue eyes, a kind face, and short brown hair. wears a black tunic and trousers, with black boots. He also has a hood, but only wears it when he is trying to stay hidden.
Weapons: A dark green bow, with brown arrows. He also carries a medium length sword that he can use with great skill in close combat. Has a small dagger hidden in his tunic if he needs it.
Description: Despite his dark clothes he is actually very bright and optimistic. Usually has a big smile on his face unless something serious happens. He comes from the land of Pennoh where there are some legends about the people there. He claims that's why he came to Alavaria, but he won't say any more. He is very quick and light on his feet, but if need be, he can stand as still as a statue. He is also very flexible, and is very stealthy. Has plenty of compassion and is hard to make angry, but when he loses his temper he can be quite ferocious. He seems to be hiding a secret, but no one can tell what it is.
(Whew! That was harder than I thought! :P)
Jackson
Edward the Brown
Age: 18
Appearance: Is tall for his age, and has brown hair and brown eyes. Has a great smile, which you may see often. Wears a light brown tunic, with a few things tucked inside. Has dark brown boots. He also has a brown cloak just in case he needs it. Notice that everything's brown: good for hiding in the woods.
Weapons: Bow and arrows, and his father's knife.
Description: Edward has been through a lot in his life: His mother died when he was four from an attack from an unknown person. Edward wants revenge on whoever did. His father is a cook, and the owner of a tavern near the Kenridge Mountains.
Sir Quinn is related to him. He can be very stealthy and move without a sound. Edward likes to joke around, and can come up with some clever plans. Rather speedy. Likes adventure and exploring.
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
BTW I am the only one who gave my character flaws! Everyone else's character is an "angel" (perfect)!!!!!! Maybe I should change it!
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Ok :)!
biblebee
Ohhh….I'll think of a flaw for mine :) Have any suggestions?
Ian R.2
My character isn't perfect.
Hiruko Kagetane
No one's made them perfect.
Hiruko Kagetane
Ohhh....I'll think of a flaw for mine :) Have any suggestions?
Any "flaws" in your character can be played out in the actual RP.
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Really? goes and checks Ah! I am not the only terrible one :)! laughs
@Carissa- You don't have to do that :)!
biblebee
Hiruko Kagetane
Flaws are exposed through circumstances. In other words, when tested, your character will show their true selves.
biblebee
True.
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
I just want to make sure you didn't think I was complaining :). She could think that she is always right. Or that she is the best at her weapon (I forgot what that was :P) I don't know :P.
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Where is your character? Did you do it yet?
biblebee
No, I don't think you were complaining :) Okay…so kind of bragging and boasting. But that doesn't exactly fit because she's really quiet so she wouldn't always be going around bragging and boasting.
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Thanks :)! Ok I'll go read your character again (I forgot that about her) and then give you suggestions :)
biblebee
Alrighty :)
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Hmmm…..maybe she thinks that people who talk a lot are bragging/boasting…so kinda prejudice like Elizabeth in "Pride and Prejudice" Judges character to quickly? And it is usually bad? But then realizes her mistake and is very penitent :)
biblebee
That's a good idea! :) Thanks! :)
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
You are welcome :)! Don't make her that bad though :P :) :P!!!!!
biblebee
So here we go...tell me what y'all think. And just to let you know I came up with this on my own and did not read anyone elses characters to help me. Name: Lady Sussana Age: 18 Appearance (this is probably going to sound silly...): Long blonde hair and blue eyes. She wears white dresses but with a dark black cloak (is that the right word?) She is about 5'7". Weapons: Slingshot, and a short sword...Her weapon of choice is definitely her sword. Description: Is very reserved. Talks little and rarely shows how she truly feels but thinks a lot. She is lets others lead but stands up boldly for what she believes is right. She takes a while to trust people but when she does it takes a lot to shake her trust in them. She thinks that those who talk a lot are bragging/boasting and she very much dislikes bragging/boasting. Okay, that sounds so silly... What do y'all think?
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Good :)! I like your character a lot :)!
Hiruko Kagetane
Working on it!
biblebee
Thanks. I like yours a lot!
Hannah W. (Adelaide)
Ok! Can't wait to see it :)!
@ Carissa- Thanks :)! BTW You should ask Rachel to make one! I think she is on SC#7 :)!!!!
biblebee
I'll go do that.
God's Maiden of Virtue
This sounds like a great idea! I'd love to join!
Here's my character:
Name: Eryana
Age: 18
Appearance: Long, wavy brown hair, that reaches a couple inches past her hips; is nearly always pulled back in a French braid, to keep it out of the way. Has brown eyes. Is 5"7 in height. Wears a plain, dull green dress, with slightly wide, open sleeves, and tighter sleeves beneath those reaching just above her wrists.
Weapons: Recurve bow. Also keeps a shortsword hidden on her back behind the quiver of arrows.
Description: Is fairly reserved, but very easy to talk to. Is extremely skilled with the bow, having keen eyesight and accuracy. Can run incredibly fast, making it easy to make quick escapes and such. Is not afraid of heights - just falling. :P
Main fault: Sometimes does according to what she thinks is best, instead of just following given instructions/directions; has gotten herself into (actual) trouble a number of times. [I added this because I think we should all have at least one fault/flaw mentioned about our characters, instead of all of us just being "perfect angels". :)]
So there's my character. Let me know if you think I should change something.
Barachel the Buzzite of the Kindred of Ram
And btw, our friends call us 'lord'
Barachel the Buzzite of the Kindred of Ram
Deadpools main faults: insanity, insanity, insanity, schizophrenia, insanity
Barachel the Buzzite of the Kindred of Ram
We've got everything in the Memverse forums room. *takes a bag of chips out of the cupboard and starts munching**smiles evilly* Those are my chips. And, a few months back, I became immune to several, select, non-lethal poisons, and slipped them into all of my snacks. To discourage sneaky snack snatchers.
I ate them once, took us three months to regenerate….
Sarah B.
What do you want me to do here? :)
Barachel the Buzzite of the Kindred of Ram
And btw, our friends call us 'lord'
and we really enjoy it!