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Good, that'll make it easier to keep it from conflicting with TSTNE. I can't wait to see how this goes... when do we start??

Soon. I'm working on the major locations we'll have.

Well, it's not much… it looks lame. But if you think it's good then it must be okay! :)

I edited my character's description just a bit, FYI.

@Sarah–It's not lame! I like it. Perhaps you could add a little about her clothing, though; but only if you want to.

So here we go…tell me what y'all think. And just to let you know I came up with this on my own and did not read anyone elses characters to help me.

Name: Sussana
Age: 18
Appearance (this is probably going to sound silly…): Long blonde hair and blue eyes. She wears white dresses but with a dark black cloak (is that the right word?) She is about 5'7".
Weapons: Bow and arrow and a short sword. But her prefernce is her bow and arrow.
Description: Is very reserved. Talks little and rarely shows how she truly feels but thinks a lot. She is lets others lead but stands up boldly for what she believes is right. She takes a while to trust people but when she does it takes a lot to shake her trust in them. She thinks that those who talk a lot are bragging/boasting.

Okay, that sounds so silly… What do y'all think?

Silly?? It's great! :)

I like it as well!

Okay…I wrote it then read through it and it just sounded a bit silly. Bit if you think it's good then I'll stick with it…now I'm off to find a name :)

Very very nice! much longer then mine! :)

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(Please don't delete your comment just because I said that, okay?? ;) )

Hey…yours is great as well!

Just realized I failed to give any description of physical appearance for my character. Off to edit that as well… :)

Thank you! I try not to say stuff like that. (until yesterday I never did… wonder what is wrong with me…)

So here we go...tell me what y'all think. And just to let you know I came up with this on my own and did not read anyone elses characters to help me. Name: Yet to be decided but I think I know :) Age: 18 Appearance (this is probably going to sound silly...): Long blonde hair and blue eyes. She wears white dresses but with a dark black cloak (is that the right word?) Weapons: Bow and arrow and a short sword. But her prefernce is her bow and arrow. Description: Is very reserved. Talks little but thinks a lot. She is lets others lead but stands up boldly for what she believes is right. Okay, that sounds so silly... What do y'all think?

Pretty good. I think she needs a name. Otherwise we'll call her Blue-Eyed Girl With Bow. And, a cloak is different from a tunic, which I think is what you're thinking of.

I like it as well!

Hey, we're waiting for yours! :P

Aaand… you did it anyway. sigh

*Turner the Adventurer* *Age: 21* *Clothing: Black all around; tunic, trousers, and boots. Also wears a black cape and hood, which usually hides his face from view. Generally refuses to use armor at any time.* *Appearance: Low-cut brown hair and short brown beard. 6'2, and fairly muscular build.* *Weapons: Ancient-looking broadsword. Is also an excellent bowman, but his sword is his weapon of choice.* *Description: Despite his secretive look and ways, his good friends find that he can be a rather amusing (and often sarcastic) individual. He is ferocious in battle, but can be gentle as a lamb if necessary. His family history is unknown to everyone, possibly even to himself. Little is known about his recent history either, as he has only come to seek his fortune in Alavaria in the past month. Rumor has it that he was a nobleman in a neighboring country, but no proof of this yet exists.*

Nice update! I love how you included height, I forgot to mention that!

Sorry! I miss read what you said. Oops!

I like it as well!

Hey, we're waiting for yours! :P

I know…I have yet to type it up. I'm working on British Literature right now.

How convenient… JK! ;)

@Sam–Thanks! Now I'm really dying to get this thing started… :D

I'm speed-reading through TSTNE (while doing some research for a science fair project….) to find some locations. If you know/remember any, let me know!

I updated mine… what do you think? Anything else I should/could add? :)

So do either Ella or Sussana sound good?

Sussana!

Well, we definitely need to make the castle of Omb one of the locations. The cave in the woods where the king and his men hide would be good as well… Oh, and Liar's Lair might work… And maybe even the forest at the beginning of the story…

Totally Sussana!

Sussana sounds good… though, you might perhaps want to change it to "Susanna"? Unless you did that on purpose, of course. :)

@Sarah–Just a sec, I'll go look at it. :)

Okay :)

No, I didn't do that on purpose :)

Okay, I like it! You could add height and a little physical appearance as well if you wanted to, but I don't think you have to. :)

And the forest in the beginning. the fortresses of Cavaria, Omb, Forenton, and Ambrest, …..

Okay, I like it! You could add height and a little physical appearance as well if you wanted to, but I don't think you have to. :)

But it always helps! :)

All right. :) So are you keeping it as Sussana, or do you want to change it?

Like 8'5'' or something? LOL

No, I didn't do that on purpose :)

I really like it spelled like that though!

Two of those I already mentioned… ;) But yes, I like (and… forgot about…) the others as well! :)

Well, of course. :)

I'm going to have her name be Susanna :)

And the forest in the beginning. the fortresses of Cavaria, Omb, Forenton, and Ambrest, .....

And the village near the Straden Mountains…..

Should I add height to mine as well?

Yes, make her a giant! ;P

@Carissa–Yes, you really can keep it as Sussana if you want to. Sometimes different spelling looks cooler (hence "Nicolas"… ;D). :)

No thanks… I'm no giant! LOL I can't enjoy rivalry when I can just smash people. :S

Like 8'5'' or something? LOL

Is she a seamstress too? 'Cuz not many tailors are gonna make clothes her size!

Ah yes, of course. But… would that still be there after all this time?

@Carissa–Go ahead and do whatever you want. :)

No, I didn't remeber how to spell it. But which do you think looks netter?
@elizabeth: Okay :)

Okay.

She's a maid of all trades I guess. :)

And the forest in the beginning. the fortresses of Cavaria, Omb, Forenton, and Ambrest, .....

And the village near the Straden Mountains.....

Kenridge mountains and Foothills of Trenn and Forest of Kolgarriat…

So you're agreeing to have her at that height? ;P JK

Geez, I forgot about all these… I really think I need to look back over the story… :P

Only if you reallllllly want me to….. :P

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